[StarFaggot]

Baby Cakes:

1 - lol at first line, the irony was good and punch itself was decent
2 - pep boys line was aight, connection was a bit strange for me. I mean I get it but.,
3 - hush rubbed you for being peculiar, if read wrong that's gay. Anyway the set up bar could've been tightened. Lol @ rubbing Vicks on Suths pecs lol that's a goofy bar. Lisp angle could've been worked in better but I like the idea.
4 - ok, simple n not effective
5 - i like the respectable shooter excellent mover multis, punch was dry unless I'm missing something.
6 - counter productive made me chuckle but it's just kind of silly
7 - ha, wtf... Decent I guess
8 - ok personal

Overall you guys have an unorthodox style of punches. Some weird thoughts but some cool bars


Audi Boys:


1 - pampering is kind of silly here, bc it has the word pamper but pampering urself with pampers.. Use of word pampering here is off but not to think too technically this is ok
2 - Big Bang theory bar works on multiple levels, I like it, would've been more points if u left off no rubber part
3 - not feeling
4 - Robin Williams bar was predictable and not cleverly put together
5 - pancreatitis bar needed lots of work, pan create tightest is passable for wordplay but not by much
6 - this is just a simple comparison bar not much creativity
7 - lol this is nice, kept it simple but clever
8 - ehhh not really here

Overall you had some cool stuff that was badly worded. A couple good zingers in there.




Ok this was a close battle bc it had weird misses from both sides. You guys could clean things up by being a bit more simple but it seems you tried to be overly creative and couldn't bring it all together...

It was a close battle I had to judge by points.

Baby Cake - 18.6/40
Audi Boys - 18.4/ 40


MVGT Baby Cake