thiz was kinda out there too me....for some reason I liked how this flowed the best
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Took a little nerdy kid,
Few days, energy conservative,
but this juz seems a lil' random to me...didn't get in depth enough wit' a plot to keep my interest and actually make me wanna understand where it was gonna go...
see it workin' in the poetry world tho'...it's still a unique piece
HoLLa
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