murda sho: This was a solid but unremarkable verse. Your wording was there, and you had a few timely lines. The opener, as has been the case in most of your verses this tournament, was your best line. I liked BL tee as a concept but not in execution, but most of your verse was the opposite. The "When I see"/"When u see" thing felt very much like something Fracture would have used in 2004, for better or worse. I didn't think you got grimy enough, especially knowing what he would do.
BROKE LESNAR: The detective stuff didn't pay off as much here, mostly because you didn't have as much and smartly steered away from overuse. The Jayson Fresh line was clever, and the closer was awesome. As far as the more generic stuff, you worded the Guy Ritchie and Aer sho lines well, but I can't help but feel like they must be done to death by this point. No Filter could have been used better, too. You had more interesting concepts and personals than murda sho, but this battle was weak compared to both of your previous outputs.
Vote: BROKE LESNAR
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