Kin: You're too formulaic. You sound like you're trying so hard to rap. And turning this into a battle was a bad move to me.
bxyunggritty: I liked this, but I think you need to let things air out with your style. You've got a pro style but need to stop trying to jam everything into lines. Just let it breathe. You're good. I liked this. Very direct approach, but you had a good hook.
Badi Alii: This was bad. You sounded like you were freestyling legitimately.
Vote: bxyunggritty
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