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Old 08-13-2014, 07:58 PM   #6
Paradigm
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Advanced Placement:
Try & pursue the title's suicidal esp since Roar had you in dire straits
I'm a great - You lost to a guy who named himself after noise a Lion makes
Semi Hit - Funny but not much else.
Yea I still contact your wife, it's great until you accuse the slut
Ask Tyson, your wife needs privacy when texting a man she used to fuck
Semi Hit - Funny, Discussion flip. Cool.
I'll bruise Gam's shoulders & brake his hands, have reporters in place with cams
He'll be shameful when anchors cover his swollen arms like Popeye the Sailorman
Hit - Nice. I have a concept like this in my archives lol
You impressed Universal Execs? LOL Bitch what the FUCK are you on?!
If jaws dropped & they put their hands together it was to cover a yawn
Semi Hit - put their hands together needs to be reworded I think. Still cool. Personal.
Delusional, claim your sex counts high & you stay with a different bitch
Lost count at 16 but couldn't count on one to spend Thanksgiving with
Hit - Personal. LOL ouch.
It'd be Rocky theme, I'd do prison just for you showing up & won't cop a plea
Shiiit I'd willingly take the years from your appearance like a fucking oxy cream
Hit - LOL perfect wording dang. Nice.
My stock's supreme so if I feel like hopping on a jet, I gave my paper
Your broke ass you only goes into airplane mode trying to save on data
Semi Hit - Forced Rhyme lol paypa/date stop it. Cool swag.
Blanco its a FACT your wife (slut) dresses you, this a personal bar
Last time you put your foot down & selected gear was to reverse in her car
Hit - LOL dope.

~ It's Aero
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Taking Hostages:

When TH c both u lames, the piece assures u getting your brains blown.
A rapture with no 'scape Goat.....except when Dom blames u for the loss u'll take though.
Hit - Good opener
Queer Aer's in love with my partner..no homo, but that fruit should quit the site.
I mean... the way he tried to dodge Murda...proves this coon's a BITCH................ for Lyfe.
Semi Miss - Ending needs work
The hype's actually bull. I swear Dom champing these duels is luck.
But'f anyone on the BoreDom innate its, this fool..... cuz his style's naturally dull as fuck.
Miss - Forced Bored Nominate is how i decyphered that but boredom/boreDOM dont work. If it worked this mightve connected
No hygiene I mean.. U just can't tell he fuckin smells?.. Ntm, dumb as hell
But to actually see a chick giving Airhead...... she'd have to literally be one herself.
Hit - lol cool prolly played though
Your partnership is a big fat corruption, of two fags untrusting..
Your just a martyrdom; ..and even Aero wouldn't step in front of that dysfunction..
Semi Miss - Martyrdom is cool ending needs work tho
aero poppin off?? Lbr this friggen peasant ain't lifting weapons..
Let's just face it... Airsoft, an that's worthless against a 3 fifty seven
Semi Hit - ok nameplay ending had no punch tho
Buried alive, under a tombstone lying in rubble God?.....ur finished
That would be Airplane and simple.... Wishing to b 'fly an above'the squad. But isn't.
Miss - I liked everything to be honest until wishing and on... the end needs work. This had potential though.
Bet both were in a frenzy to write. Trying to rush to win but we saw the ploy.
So for the record......we came to show we're taking AP's throne: LeSean Mccoy.
Semi Hit - Cooll
Almost all of Aeros bars connected and were creative and/or personal. 1-2 hay makers prolly thanksgiving and closer were ether. Gamble and Blanco had opener and a few others that needed better wording to connect. The creativity was there just execution on the ending of some just fell flat. Props though but Advanced Placements verse was just better all around.

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