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UnbornBuddha · 08-13-2014, 07:33 PM

This was an eloquent piece my brethren. It would have been nice if it was a tad longer.
Anyways, my favorite lines were

"Seen that it was all a dream and started from scratch
walking faster. watching cloud formations mark me a path"

The wording has this Edgar Allen Poe feel to it, gothic yet poetic. Never straying into the realm of grotesqueness.

Keep up the splendid work.

08-13-2014, 07:33 PM	#10
UnbornBuddha Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,008 Battle Record: 23-10 Champed - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 5 Rep Power: 23856379	This was an eloquent piece my brethren. It would have been nice if it was a tad longer. Anyways, my favorite lines were "Seen that it was all a dream and started from scratch walking faster. watching cloud formations mark me a path" The wording has this Edgar Allen Poe feel to it, gothic yet poetic. Never straying into the realm of grotesqueness. Keep up the splendid work. Last edited by UnbornBuddha; 08-13-2014 at 07:36 PM.