[Zen]

First off let me just say that the way you word things pisses me off sometimes, because it's so damn good. The opening couplet was a good example of that. It was one of those lines that I read on here and wish I had thought of it first.

"portals to the world in a paraffin glaze."
^^So fucking angry at that.

termed sadistic – eternal dervish who learned from witches
It was her destiny to metamorphose into the mother of all birds… the Griffin
^^Flow was effortless here.

what remained of Meredith the Griffin was rubble, feathers and guts
Yes, her ascent was a rush – she thought that she’d been cleverly dubbed
A celestial fowl whose vitality was suspended & such
but in otherworldly realms, even immortality is never enough
^^Nice ending.

I'm not sure how you come up with these topics, but if anyone attempted anything else like this it'd come out ridiculous. You make them great. Thanks for the read, Vulgar.