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Originally Posted by Split
... I liked how you pretty much freestyled it... not in the sense that, oh, I did this in 1 minute 13 seconds be impressed- but...
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Who says that I
didn't do it in 1:13?
Haha, kiddn'. I know whatchu mean.
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Originally Posted by Split
schemes and rhymes were very underplayed but I don't mind tbh.
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true.
i threw in a few wild cards
(i.e. "Cynical / Imagery / Twitching De [capitated body])
but def, there were a lot of simple ones.
thank you for the feedback & rhythm advice.
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DexLabb,
you're right, it is a bit babbly. funny you should say it, emcee squared told me the exact same thing once:
"spare me your psycho-babble, this is not a parlor". Lol.
although it's goofy, just about everything is true. Except for the part about clear-weather sailing and AK47s, the rest is not made up at all. Even the nightmare I referenced just recently did happen.
But for sure, I understand that truth doesn't inherently make it meaningful. And perhaps makes it more pathetic (comically i would hope). ha.