i thought this was a fun whirlwind.
i really like this part the best, because i laughed the beginning of the first sentence, but moreso because of the rhyming.
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Originally Posted by big baby
Warning: this forwarded optional post contains floral support, an audible score coupled with comical prose at the requiems office. Equilibrium's offset, w/ a Pentium optic, hacked into the systems metropolis & stole a Chevrolet Corvette.
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i also really loved the "D with Magic / BBC Channel" rhyme.
i would say it jumps around a bit, mainly boasting and joking (yes,i already know you'll say you were serious on some of it heh heh)... anyway.. jumps around and is boasting and joking.. but I of all people am in no place to criticize such a style.