Seadad: very rhymesayers. such diction. seriously though, flow was good. lyrics weren't very complex but they got to the point. rode the beat well. a bit short for my taste, the actual content outside of the outro was less than two minutes. i feel like this story could have been expanded upon. agree w/ certain that this is great listening music.
Kanman: how many times have we both used this plot device? you've definitely set a new bar with this track. flow was phenomenal and the dubs were perfect every time. the story had my full attention and the lyrics used were vivid and syllabically (is that a word)?) complex. loved the change of gears with the beat drop. fantastic story overall. some of the ad libs i understand were supposed to be awkward what with the character and all, but they felt a bit too polished if that makes sense. either way, this was one of your best tracks to date. stop battling, do more of this.
v/ kanman
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