K Huntsman had a fake personal that didn't have credibility, seemed like it was pulled out of a database of Fight Night filler. Nothing wrong with it other than no pertinence or creativity
Defiant, I think you did a great job with your setup, but I don't think there was a way to make that punch line come across smoothly nahmean? The twist to the punch was nice but the meat of it "hunt for red October" is never how you'd say someone was gonna be broke that month
v/ Defiant, because tho it wasn't technically sound, there was no technique whatsoever to K's bar
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Last edited by Split; 08-13-2014 at 05:54 AM.
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