Destroyer: I really liked everything about this, to be honest. The self-deprecation at the beginning was funny and a nice counter to a handful of Swerve's potential lines. The punchline was clever and well-worded, not subtle but also not in-your-face.
Swerve: I have an epistomological issue with this couplet: How is it an insult to call Destroyer faithful to his attractive, younger girlfriend? I also didn't like that "two" was in the second line twice.
Vote: Destroyer
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