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Originally Posted by Aero
I had this broken down bar for bar then it got erased.
Cool battle I liked Murdas BL tee line, liked when he said in first line "your verse was misses and weird tries no drama for the" cus it was true. Other than those I felt like verse was full of just ok stuff. Seemed rushed.
Broke the jayaon fresh line was ok albeit generic, you had some other bars that could've been worded differently like the Sbarro and Stomp the Yard
Sho needed better concepts and Broke needed better wording.
I enjoyed Murda's verse more that's who gets my vote.
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Fuck paradigm, I read votes bish.
I thought Murdas wording was better, lol. And made note of the tiny wordage and set-ups that amplified not only the 'punchline' bar, but also the precedent. It was unique and fresh.
Murda had a bunch of jabs here and throughout and was an enjoyable verse. My only nitpicking is that, before every punchline bar he writes about guns or something. Which is cool, I guess, but it gets redundant. I make note of another battler in this tournament who had repetitive sex bars and almost lost the battle even when his verse was clearly better. Nothing is said here. I guess pretend guns and killing people is cooler than having pretend sex with woman? figures. Fags.
Anyway, liked both verses. Broke had a lot of jabs too, and an enjoyable read too. Wording wise both lacked if you're looking for that end sting, but it's tough, and if you look primarily into that, it'll suck. I liked all the lines aero quoted saying he didn't like. If I have to think about it for like 9 seconds then it's not good in my book. Close battle but I'm going with broke.
Vote - Broke Lesnar