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StarFaggot · 08-12-2014, 03:13 PM

I had this broken down bar for bar then it got erased.

Cool battle I liked Murdas BL tee line, liked when he said in first line "your verse was misses and weird tries no drama for the" cus it was true. Other than those I felt like verse was full of just ok stuff. Seemed rushed.

Broke the jayaon fresh line was ok albeit generic, you had some other bars that could've been worded differently like the Sbarro and Stomp the Yard

Sho needed better concepts and Broke needed better wording.

I enjoyed Murda's verse more that's who gets my vote.

08-12-2014, 03:13 PM	#3
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	I had this broken down bar for bar then it got erased. Cool battle I liked Murdas BL tee line, liked when he said in first line "your verse was misses and weird tries no drama for the" cus it was true. Other than those I felt like verse was full of just ok stuff. Seemed rushed. Broke the jayaon fresh line was ok albeit generic, you had some other bars that could've been worded differently like the Sbarro and Stomp the Yard Sho needed better concepts and Broke needed better wording. I enjoyed Murda's verse more that's who gets my vote. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]