Yeah, Jil had his best showing yet but what tripped him up was the setup. I think adding the comma after u attract sick was completely unnecessary and only slowed down the momentum of the bar, which in turn kind of distracted me from the impact. BUT, I really dug the concept and the avy pic reference. Meth used a similar approach, a np with humor involving whores that was just as enjoyable as Jil's.
I think I have to go by the creativity of the np, and since using Meth in the most basic of flips plus due to the fact Jil's entire bar was centralized on it, I have to go with Meth.
v-Meth
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