I guess I'll start.
First and foremost, Congrats to both to making it to the final 4.
I was gonna say more but I'm not trying to be toooo gay.
Sho
That last verse was misses and weird trys, with no drama for the facts
Those punches committed worst air strikes than Obama on Iraq
--This is ok, nothing to heavy here. Wording is fine, just doesn't seem to hard hitting--
So let's play, u could just get a scar or ur chest caved
But I mean u no harm Les, that's just what u are on ur best day
--Eh. I don't mean to be the english teacher here. But the Les in Broke's name is a "z" sound, where as in harmless it's a hard "s". Either way this wasn't the greatest--
If u were good in the past then my advice is to stop or recycle now
Cause if u want a shot it'd rival what those cops did to Michael Brown
--lol yo. Im like 15 minutes from all of these fucking riots and shit. Shits insane. Anyway, cool hitter here--
It'd make a mess when I pop and clap a couple rounds...
Bullets'd hit BL tee and it'd look like u dropped a sandwich on the ground
--When I saw the BLT play I thought this was gonna be a lot better. I feel like you could have executed this in a more direct way to make it hit harder--
When I see ur chick she yells "HEY SHO!" and commits to giving head
When u see ur chick she says "hey" low, and continues wishing u were dead
--filler--
We were rooting for u Broke! Then u started getting too loose with riddles
Now if we fed off ur energy we'd probably be eating fruit loops and skittles
--haha--
I knew u'd be next to get beat, so once I shoot ur chest with this heat
The doctors'll have to hold u together more than ur two bf's when u sleep
--Ok. Not the best/worst--
My archers on deck, but I told em to wait til u rap or attempt rhymes
Then do u like my last round, u won't see the aeros till after ur dead lines
--dope--
Broke
ya I've been NS'ed twice n' with TicTac I could have easily wavered
but now it's the 4th rd n' murda's the result of that bullet leaving the chamber
--Cool play on an obviously used Murda/Murder kill Murda concept lol.--
u champed Bad Blood II..3 yrs ago, that's 1,095 days u wasted text
n' 2011 was the last time I remember seeing anything from Jayson Fresh
--Nice--
those 1 letter np's on Apex were trash, so up ur game or sit it down
u tried to ruin Aer sho....I'll do that n' crash this fucking Plane into the ground
--Seen air show too many times for this one. The personal spin on it makes it passable but still not that great--
I'm doubting the guy, google Tana Rocks he's got an album to try
u said No Filter's taking Ohio by storm, but its 82° without a cloud in the sky
--cool--
fuck ur bogus goon image u frat boy, u aren't a threat dawg n' listen
u only roll with hard ass street niggas that'll stomp..the yard in a step competition
--lol. Ok. Made me chuckle but not that great--
but u a paid g right? I'll snatch ur revolver n' dual wield to loot sho dinero
I'm strapped for cash so if guy ritchie get the lock stock n' two smoking barrels
--Thought this was dope--
when it comes to NC HOF discussions u should never get involved
ur like Sbarro, bitch..
..at the bottom of the food chain n' nowhere near the center of em' all
--eh. Didn't love the concept or the execution to be perfectly honest, man--
inb4 I post ur pic, ☆ tats on dudes r gay..u would admit that right?
just ONE makes u a faggot..so 5 on ur forearm's a review for how u live that life
--Simple and direct. You're a fucking detective dude I swear.--
Cool battle. Verse from Sho definitely wasn't as good as his verse against Alvin I don't think. He had some stuff in here that I just wasn't feeling too much, others could though. That Hey line I thought was probably the worst line from either verse. That just felt super filler and lazy to me. Broke had some cool lines. I thought Jason Fresh was probably line of the battle. His misses weren't as bad wither in my opinion.
Dope stuff dudes. Battle could go either way, good luck.
V/ Broke Lesnar
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