[Zen]

Poor neutral. I'll leave feed in awhile to make up for these guys hating you for no reason lol

Acting cute is lame. Your attributes match that of Ving Rhames - on smoothies and apple juice, loosely, a lapis lazuli acting a prude but it's actually a ruse, see?

No line breaks, no lime and no lemon, would climb up to heaven but the size of my melon makes my wise cerebellum tell my spine to forget it.

Those two sections I quoted are my favorites from this, especially the second one. Very clever. Some sections were a little more lackluster than those I quoted up above, but the piece never bored me. I wanted to finish it, and when I had I was impressed.

I don't think I've ever read anything from you on here, but I'll check your next work out for sure if you can continue to produce work like this. Well done.