Mr Purple Bile of Fat Man Guts did something here that I really like and he put something human on display, something I did growing up when I would get bullied for my nationality and I really like that. Everybody needs slice and a safe place to get away from what ails them and that was cool. Relatability made this poem cool.
Ms. Aiko is cool so I had no problem reading this ^.^ seriously though this poetic angst-torn love epic was cleverly shrouded in metaphor til the tell was uncleverly unmasked at the end sorta. I fell in love with what it meant but the whole divorce thing, regardless of how necessary it was, felt kinda unnecessary. I hope that made sense. Anyways I really think this was cool. Divorce aside.
Choosing Aiko!
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