snake, good descriptions throughout. you evidently put some thought into the concept before starting. felt lines were pretty long, made for some different stuff scheme wise. read nicely, good imagery, good showing.
wolf. nice flow but you didnt rly build towards anything. strung a couple lines together here and there but too many random tangents. missing too many prerequisites of a quality topical verse to be considered a close contest imo.
+1 snake
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