Peter -- the fact that you wrote about tesla is cool as fuck. The part where u didn't go into any of his awesomely weird tests like the teleportation stuff makes me furious. I understand the angle which you chose to wrote at but it made this out to be a bland bio-rap with a touch of socioeconomics. Not the shit tesla deserved.
Butts - sick verse man. Not many folks can carry out a story with as clean of a control of language and rhyme as this exhibited. There has been my favorite submission so far and you are my favorite to win this.
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