Purple Puke - Flowed alright, the story was cool enough, thought it could have been longer. Still the verse was cool enough, enjoyed the concept of the topical being that the character you had in store fought an internal battle more than anything else. Cool shit.
Jhene Aiko - I enjoyed the first four lines here, it caught my interest at once. However, I felt it started to dwindle a little bit halfway through. It was cool enough for what it was, but the concept of love as a battle isn't really that unique when it comes down to it. The similies between the two that you put forth was sometimes great and other times not so great, but as I said; it was cool enough for what it was.
Vote - Purple Puke. Thought his/her verse was short, but I felt he/she did more with what was posted than Jhene Aiko did. Also thought the concept was better than Aiko's.
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