Gas - I think you know what you've done here... This is a great concept and obviously a lot of work went into your verse. It was impressive. That being said, I thought it was unnecessarily complicated at points and maybe could've had more impact if some of the language was more accessible.
Wolfpeen - this had some cool rhymes and was fun to read but in terms of substance Gaseous snake's verse blows you out of the water. I didn't dislike what you did but it just didn't shine when put next to your opponent's verse. I would've liked some storyline or something.
Vote - Gaseous Snake
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