purple puke ew gross name tbh. verse was good though, way better than your name. in a short verse you wrote a good summary of a story, makes me wonder how good it would have been if you spent more time on it. aiko was weird for not saying anything tho. whatevs this was cool, idk if you really want me to go in depth on an obv rushed/unfinished verse, but the premise is good and it was a clever interpretation of the topic, would def be worth finishing on your own time.
jhene aiko more like jhene idk cuz your an alias rofl but marriage as a battlefield was cool. honestly for the longest time I thought it was about straight guys in gay porn, which is also a battle I'd imagine. plus you said a lot of gay things like pounding your ass, full frontal, flashing dicks and shit. your gayness worked for you though I guess, prob not the first time that's been said to you. rhymes were good, some wording was cannibal AWKS cuz it was so akwweird it was eating away at the good shit in your verse. solid verse, good thing for you puke was dumb about not writing
vote aiko
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