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Old 08-07-2014, 08:58 PM   #6
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That bar was rugged. I don't know, seems like you're trying too hard to be complex. Just be natural about it. Just because it's not a battle verse doesn't mean punchlines won't make it better, also - HF heads were usually the best at integrating that aspect of their writing into their topicals. Some food for thought, good post.
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