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Pharaohs Army · 08-07-2014, 05:49 PM

ironically suffers a nasty injury in the new, less violent non-football sport..
begins studying kinesiology as a scientific career path, more than just a hobby..
finds out his on-again/off-again girlfriend, who is in some ways quite a headcase, is unexpectedly pregnant with his child..
the child is a boy who, starting at a young age, the Pee-wee level, comes to love football. And, as time unfolds, his talent is such that he is able to pursue a dream of playing DI college ball after a stellar high school career, where he played multiple positions..
meanwhile the father is proud, nurturing this gift and going to as many games as he can despite his hectic studies (and later, field research&published studies)..
the dad has even been saving $ in case the son doesn't get a "full ride" from a big school..
you could go many places from here.. like choose your own adventure, but let's just assume he Does get the scholarship at a large football school, playing a position of your choice. he might not start as a freshman, but by his soph year or redshirt frosh he is battling up the depth chart and begins taking the field on crisp autumn saturdays..
throughout all this you can expound upon the relationship between the kinesiologist and his baby' mama... maybe they patch things up and become stable, both nurturing the boy's dreams.. maybe she becomes even worse of a headcase, and the father struggles to juggle the stressful relationship with his demanding kinesiology pursuits.. ..or maybe they totally part ways at any point in the boy's life, with custody either split or going solely to the father (but not solely to the mom of course, due to issues or incidents about her which you could elaborate on)..
anyway, at some point the dad and son have to have an argument about safety&concussions, with the son being very stubborn and the dad reluctantly knowing that it's too late to foster doubt or needless worry into the dreams of his only son.. but perhaps he insists on a special helmet.
maybe the dad's work could involve studies for major sports Leagues, even if they're detrimental with respect to lawsuits and "league image"..
the son's college days, particularly off the field... could be many chapters right there.. lotta options.
i don't know.. maybe it's all sounding dry..but like i said there's a lot of places you could go with it and i think you could make it an entertaining read..
i know it's just an extension of your own idea and not an original..
but nonetheless, you're welcome.

08-07-2014, 05:49 PM	#7
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	ironically suffers a nasty injury in the new, less violent non-football sport.. begins studying kinesiology as a scientific career path, more than just a hobby.. finds out his on-again/off-again girlfriend, who is in some ways quite a headcase, is unexpectedly pregnant with his child.. the child is a boy who, starting at a young age, the Pee-wee level, comes to love football. And, as time unfolds, his talent is such that he is able to pursue a dream of playing DI college ball after a stellar high school career, where he played multiple positions.. meanwhile the father is proud, nurturing this gift and going to as many games as he can despite his hectic studies (and later, field research&published studies).. the dad has even been saving $ in case the son doesn't get a "full ride" from a big school.. you could go many places from here.. like choose your own adventure, but let's just assume he Does get the scholarship at a large football school, playing a position of your choice. he might not start as a freshman, but by his soph year or redshirt frosh he is battling up the depth chart and begins taking the field on crisp autumn saturdays.. throughout all this you can expound upon the relationship between the kinesiologist and his baby' mama... maybe they patch things up and become stable, both nurturing the boy's dreams.. maybe she becomes even worse of a headcase, and the father struggles to juggle the stressful relationship with his demanding kinesiology pursuits.. ..or maybe they totally part ways at any point in the boy's life, with custody either split or going solely to the father (but not solely to the mom of course, due to issues or incidents about her which you could elaborate on).. anyway, at some point the dad and son have to have an argument about safety&concussions, with the son being very stubborn and the dad reluctantly knowing that it's too late to foster doubt or needless worry into the dreams of his only son.. but perhaps he insists on a special helmet. maybe the dad's work could involve studies for major sports Leagues, even if they're detrimental with respect to lawsuits and "league image".. the son's college days, particularly off the field... could be many chapters right there.. lotta options. i don't know.. maybe it's all sounding dry..but like i said there's a lot of places you could go with it and i think you could make it an entertaining read.. i know it's just an extension of your own idea and not an original.. but nonetheless, you're welcome. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 08-07-2014 at 06:06 PM.