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Nigma · 03-28-2013, 05:25 PM

Some neat concepts. Only part I didn't like was "He scours the land for battle, overpowering man and cattle."
First half the line was very promising, the second half fell way short.

03-28-2013, 05:25 PM	#3
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Some neat concepts. Only part I didn't like was "He scours the land for battle, overpowering man and cattle." First half the line was very promising, the second half fell way short.