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Old 08-06-2014, 02:42 AM   #6
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Originally Posted by Vulgar View Post
Like a scope predisposed to puncture the occipital lobe,
The soul grows weaker with every drink and every sip of the soave.
Expecting to implode when you think you're alone,
^Very solid.

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