[UnbornBuddha]

"Colonic the ulcers" Sounds painful.

Anyways you use a very colorful language that gives even the most random images meaning in someway or another. You also have an interesting mesh of wording that is very unique, and probably have honed over the years. My favorite lines were the last two.
Only thing I can really add is sometimes your choice of words that you mesh together, while very unique, sometimes oppose each other, and there is inherent conflict in the line. Yet many at times they find resolution, but not always, and that leads to oppositional paradoxes that appear to have no credence to them, well at least to the naked eye. What it proposes is based of incongruity, but somehow you still manage to find, or better yet define with detailed artistry the unapparent symmetry. But sometimes it does remain a tad disproportionate, in terms of finding the right balance of the nitpicking between the ethereal and material, and all their apparitions.
Thank you.