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Old 08-05-2014, 04:39 PM   #15
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you write a bit like a person who has an ignorant view of one aspect of writing and then builds on that misunderstanding. that probably doesn't make sense but i know exactly what the fuck i mean. it wasn't an insult, either. i wouldn't say this was bad. you definitely had some good lines, but on the whole, it didn't read naturally to me. i know you can write, though.

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