stripping away the bells and whistles most of us commonly employ in our writing )in this venue, at least( and allowing the simplicity of language to bring forth a very organic potency is appreciated. i didn't really like this until the dialogue began, if i'm honest, but i can see even the somewhat mundane writing before it was necessary to pad out what would follow. i haven't read a lot from you, idk if this is your style or what, but i liked this even if my impression of you now is that of an emophag.
jk. semi-serious, actually. but there worse things.
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