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Lol I aint sulking an if -_- didnt piss me off I wouldnt of said shit..


But fuck it now I am going to grumble! How are these not obvious??? Seriously!

I aint He whose name shall not be spoken but ill leave you speechless whether you post or not
You aint the king of shit but after im finished youll be postin dots
(Im leaving him speechless - he will be posting "..." which is what He whose name shall not be spoken did to everyones posts while at the same time im working it in with king of the dot... This should of been easy enough, even if it was a miss... no one mentioned it once!

He brought punchlines for dummies to help him get his votes..
But couldnt cough one up even if I force fed him the book and all his notes
The most simple concept and its the only one people mentioned...

You remind me of abortion and you breathing is an abortion Advertisement
Clear punch here - Again if you didnt like it fine but no one even mentions it

You lack the bite, your down an out in this league, scamperin on the ground
After this punch knocks veneerz out he'll be bloody, seethin, reachin for my crown
Veeneerz - crowns? Such obvious word play here....an personally the one worth mentioning from the battle - again not one mention in any feedback.

I wasnt complaining I lost because I aint like that - I never done it before when I have had a hell a lot more right to do so - But the feedback would indicate the voters didnt pay any attention if the only thing they mention is the most simple concept in there...

I knew I didnt bring it that week which is why i said i would go work on delivery but fo real - if no one is mentioning them i am going to assume it was lost on niggas and this shit wasnt exactly the matrix, its pretty clear....

Sometimes I get the impression people look at the first vote and just mimic there opinons to save themselves actually doing the work

Anyways nice mag - rant over