Quote:
Originally Posted by BROKE LESNAR
when ur aunt Kerry finally died i was effing glad
cuz i ain't seen a bitch make such a melodramatic exit since that prima Donna left ur dad
HIT - Dope - Double Personal - LOL
in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat
u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet
HIT - Good - Personal - LOL - Setup needs a tad better wording to connect for dope
I remember when Donna said to pound the trim
but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them
SEMI HIT - LOL - I like this a lot but the ending seemed not to hit that hard
i pick Mandy up to fuck n' she cling to the dude
take her back to Sonic......place an order n' get a quickie in the whip b4 he brings us our food
MISS - nothing really here, sonic nameplay but prolly shouldve done something different with it
Kate's a slut n' idk how many loads her muff seen
but when Kerry was dying............i told her there wasn't a cure n' she still chose to suck peen
SOLID HIT - LOL With a better setup this couldve been dope i dont know, still cool
took Mandy to Aruba, got engaged/bad decision
cuz then she wanted to experience Arikok n' Eagle Beach..with her legs spread in that position
SEMI MISS - Forced. Like the concept tho
I pinned Manda down, wowed her n' it's damn true
cuz when i gave her the D. Bryan...she was screaming YES! YES! YES! louder than his fans do
SEMI MISS - ehhhhhhhhhh D Bryan kinda forced to me
so to recap ur fam's a bunch of dumb facking curs
n' while u spend ur ext on Bags personals.......Amanda's in my master bedroom unpacking hers
SOLID HIT - cool
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tic Tac
U thought this’d be easy but ya goin home in this round & I’m provin it bitch
Cuz the truth of it is, this battles so far in the Bags it substitutes as your dick
MISS - lazy concept bag/s doesnt work
I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin
I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent
SOLID HIT - Solid bar
Ya girl loves my cock & bum so I’ll thrust til I see spots of cum
I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one
SOLID HIT - Solid bar
There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good
Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood
SOLID HIT - Another Solid Bar
You’re a good Father. That's what ya girl tells me when I'm smackin her clit
I feel bad. But the Maury hears it the sooner he'll realize his kids aren't actually his
SEMI HIT - cool wp
Each drop is brazen w/ haste, you should consider takin a break
Your verses aren’t Misguided. They’re Ebola making its way to the States
SEMI MISS - ehhhhhhhh misguided connection doesnt do it here lazy couldve been a hit
You're on ya last leg, embrace it homie. You winning? Not in this shit
Just take ya Bags & leave text. You'll finally show ya Cum Into Grips...probably < his
MISS - cum wp lol and wording needs work here
Your music is awful. I’m not lovin the beat, nothing is sweet
Dog, I’d rather Slit my Wrists in a shark tank listening to Lyfza Gamble on fuckin repeat
WIFF - nothing here
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This Tic Tac from last round was infinity better. Tic was pretty consistent but had nothing that was over the top great. Good verse except for your closer. Brokes verse looks like one from people at IHH. His first two bars I thought were dope, personal and creative. He had a few misses but the first two carried him here with better overall verse. The redundancy of him hooking up with dudes family almost came into play as well. You gotta mix it up bro.
Vote - Broke Lesnar