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Old 08-04-2014, 12:07 PM   #14
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in HS u moved weight cross country n' kept heat
u were so fucking boss u ran every block in Roslyn NY.............while training for ur next meet
I remember when Donna said to pound the trim
but b4 I reminisce ab old flames.................we can watch ur self-confidence go down in them
i pick Mandy up to fuck n' she cling to the dude
take her back to Sonic......place an order n' get a quickie in the whip b4 he brings us our food

vs.

I can’t get thru 1 of ya verses. w/ stretched bars each line is reachin
I mean…The Strain is so bad it's beginning to make that show look kinda decent
Ya girl loves my cock & bum so I’ll thrust til I see spots of cum
I run the Train allll night & after the Third Rail it looks like she hopped on one
There's a reason ya Promoting failed. You bombed, that's not good
Ya audio Flat, Broke. And you couldn't give away Freestyles @ a Salon in the hood
You're on ya last leg, embrace it homie. You winning? Not in this shit
Just take ya Bags & leave text. You'll finally show ya Cum Into Grips...probably < his



I felt Broke really OD'd on the family punches and most of them were exactly the same. Sex with this person....sex with that person, it really just got old. Some of them were executed really well, but others just had me thinking "okay...same thing again?". TicTac was up and down in his verse as well...some stuff that I've seen before like the dick in Bags reference and the Maury line, but he also had my favorite line of the battle with Third Rail. I think Broke could have easily taken this had he just used some of the personal lines and thrown in some other kinds of punches. With that said...

V/ TicTac
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