[Zen]

Originally Posted by big baby

tbh i think gittos pretty funny in a subtle way but is new so is dubbed as a bish fag, but thatll ease over if he doesnt get overwhelmed which could happen if i attacked him but he cute with lil numbers in his name lmao!!!!

losah..jk

but srs losah

anyway da piece!

pretty good! i actually have more problems with dull boys commentary than gitto .. of course it is harsh, but the writer has to make what he accepts and what he doesnt accept..if someone horrible leaves you pretty brutal feed, do you accept it like 'yeah that guys totally write' but if shakespeare or bb comes in and gives you brutal honest feed, would yo accept it, or write it off? im about 95% sure that the author has read gittos work and made his own decision as to write it off or accept it...its natural. @Zen

you have a grasp on writing, but you should invoke more emotion without feeling awkward. some lines were okay, others were just filler. if you're going to separate lines, then they should have their own tale of the tape. good job

No happy birthday, Zen?

That's it fucka we fist fighting.