for whatever reasons, perhaps my own strengths and weaknesses, my opinion is that it was way better in the middle parts than in the beginning...it's all relative of course. I like the piece. but the large middle was stronger than the beginning and end i thought.
some lines i found very entertaining i am lazy right now to go through and paste them specifically but i will here edit this at some point, and do so.
(edit)this is pretty awesome when i did it faster; the beginning too... thanks for the celery line
Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 08-05-2014 at 12:22 AM.
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