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Old 08-03-2014, 12:37 AM   #4
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for whatever reasons, perhaps my own strengths and weaknesses, my opinion is that it was way better in the middle parts than in the beginning...it's all relative of course. I like the piece. but the large middle was stronger than the beginning and end i thought.

some lines i found very entertaining i am lazy right now to go through and paste them specifically but i will here edit this at some point, and do so.

(edit)this is pretty awesome when i did it faster; the beginning too... thanks for the celery line

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