ADVERSE
Remember the story of the Garden of Eden you heard as a kid? Wait…
It took one to make Eve, so it’s easy to see that Rib is BITCH MADE
[nice nameplay on the punch. great opener - 8/10]
Your career is coming to an end, take this verse as an epilogue
Especially when I go 9th grade biology on him and dissect this frog
[meh. not terrible but not super great either - 6/10]
Fuck this kid, you’re just a puppet, Ribbit
I’d probably fuck his bitch and he’d just sit there like “that’s none of my business”
[hahaha funny stuff. pretty creative too. kermit the snitch - 8/10]
I stay hittin’ her, I’m honestly almost sick of drillin’ that ho
And honestly Rib just wantin’ his baby back like a Chilli’s special..
[nice wordplay - 8/10]
You ain’t no Deputy, dawg, you’re an over glorified ho
With a career that won’t last any longer than that show
[meh. kinda lazy. you can obviously do better - 6/10]
You’re not dope at all fam, you’ll never be fly, dude…
If someone ever tells me “Rib’s crack” I’ll probably laugh until mine do
[lol kinda light but its kool. the kermit line wouldve been a better closer tho imo - 7/10]
TOTAL - 43/50
RIBBIT
U whack mate got no game to spit them bars
he was nn his way to winning until his car didnt start
[there is no personal or wordplay. very weak opener - 3/10]
ur flow gets picked apart its easy cuz u lack a firm foundation
and this aint the apprentice but ya rap career about to find its termimation
[this is a little bit better. i think a "youre fired" reference might have worked a little better - 5/10]
fuck it kid u weak and i wont need much to win
and u the type to exaggerate except u forgot to rub it in
[see my expo for bar 1 - 3/10]
ribbit the type to keep ya guessing and fight u with weapons
put a stop to u so ur shitty rhymes dont spread like the ebola infection
[meh. not awful but pretty close - 4/10]
u lost it kid u already made to many attempts
and dont say i was vividlyvague or that cat will bury u next
[i think this maybe an obscure reference to someone named vividly vague that i am not aware of?? i'll give you a high score anyway cause im a nice person like that - 5/10]
u aint a threat ad needs to forget this humiliation
he thot we gave him a clue didnt know he was asking for a detailed classificatiom
[BARS!!!! kidding that was terrible - 3/10]
TOTAL - 23/50
Vote - ADVERSE
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