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Old 08-02-2014, 03:50 PM   #15
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Dope battle, each verse had multiple bars I enjoyed. The couch line was gold, even the cheesy line about cheetos in beard was half decent. the sandwich in bags was decent, rhyme was not crisp and it came off homo almost, but still nice play. Bags had a recurring bitter ghost writer theme. The god of war was dope, but o ouija board was line of the battle. I really don't have any true flaws for either of you. But based on consistency im giving this to....bags. Opening bar for des was filler and the a lot of first line in bar were set ups, which is fine. But bags set ups for the most part were even slight disses

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