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Old 08-02-2014, 04:07 AM   #2
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This was enjoyable. The first two lines were a nice introduction. It did start to get a bit of cyclical without proceeding to any dissertation/ theorem shortly after that. But as it further progressed it unraveled, and the thesis unfolded. Also at point the rhyme scheme slowed down in terms of complexity, which was surprising to say the least. But not to digress from the topic at hand, this was nice brief read.
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