A Gory warrior Driven by the Force Within,
Not Crooked people Judging the World We Live In,
The quoted line above was my favorite of this, even though "Gory warrior" just seems off. As for the rhyming of this, it was terrific. Especially considering that English isn't your first language. The thing is, after I read all 419,000 lines of this, I had no idea what I just read. That's the probably the alcohol's fault, but I don't think so. This was cool though.
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