[UnbornBuddha]

This was nice. Albeit It had more of poetic elements to it, than of hip hop. Reason being is you obviously had rhyme schemes, but the flow at times was more narrative like, kind of like a novel. There are story telling in Hip hop, but they always keep a certain cadence that still makes them flow in a way that retains melodic elements found in Hip Hop. Even though Hip Hop is poetry, it still has this music feel to it. This was more of a literary work that one presents as prose.

As for the actual technique of it, the imagery was splendid. Sometimes you switch rhyme schemes rather abruptly, and at other times you maintain a dynamic that is enticing to follow. The content itself was okay, but the presentation was well done.