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Camp Bell · 08-01-2014, 09:24 PM

ribbit

your verse was statements. although, it flowed well
no real punch anywhere, it was more so alot of personal
attacks. inorporate more good punches and your shit
has potential to be fire.

jilti

ehh, your verse wasnt super amazing but you
had punches, although they were weak. rib had
none. id like to see more creativity with your punches

this wasnt a hot battle. rib was a bit too personal and
statement-ish. jilti, had punches which werent haymakers
but did the job due to ribs lack of. both yall keep dropping

vote: jilti

08-01-2014, 09:24 PM	#7
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	ribbit your verse was statements. although, it flowed well no real punch anywhere, it was more so alot of personal attacks. inorporate more good punches and your shit has potential to be fire. jilti ehh, your verse wasnt super amazing but you had punches, although they were weak. rib had none. id like to see more creativity with your punches this wasnt a hot battle. rib was a bit too personal and statement-ish. jilti, had punches which werent haymakers but did the job due to ribs lack of. both yall keep dropping vote: jilti __________________ get high. write rhymes.