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Old 08-01-2014, 05:22 PM   #7
BROKE LESNAR
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Originally Posted by ribbit View Post
u lost it kid u already made to many attempts
and dont say i was vividlyvague or that cat will bury u next
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Originally Posted by Adverse View Post
Remember the story of the Garden of Eden you heard as a kid? Wait…
It took one to make Eve, so it’s easy to see that Rib is BITCH MADE
Your career is coming to an end, take this verse as an epilogue
Especially when I go 9th grade biology on him and dissect this frog
You’re not dope at all fam, you’ll never be fly, dude…
If someone ever tells me “Rib’s crack” I’ll probably laugh until mine do - LOTB
I have Adverse taking this. His verse just had alot more creativity to it. That LOTB was great. Ribbit, if you look at the bar I quoted from you..that's the kind of approach you need to take to all of your verses when battling. Everything else you had felt like filler until you dropped that bar. You have potential, just focus on structure your verses with more subtle witticisim

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