good battle fellas. admittedly this wasn't an easy beat to work with but you both shined through in some spots.
veritas - the flow you opened up with was dope man. the quadruple time shit sucked the life out your verse. cause its just jibberish unless you could slow down the track but ya I don't have the capabilities. if you just added a chorus this would have been much closer. your second verse started out strong but you lost the flow about half way through on that verse. sounds like you spit that whole part in one take which is tough. overall you proved that you could rhyme. on a beat. a tough one at that.
kin = pretty polished track. considering you made it fairly quickly. the first verse was good but slightly off with the flow. ever so slightly. the chorus was awesome. and went with the beat perfectly. actually anytime I hear this beat I think of that chorus. the second verse you let loose and showed what you could really do. even the quality and richness of the vocals sounds more professional. nice song man. you took that beat and made it your own. props
vote - kin
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