diggin' this beat...
1st verse Feelin' the style man...laid back...some parts seem like they could use more energy/emotion
hook- not really feelin' it man...gotta be real haha
2nd verse-bad memories tattoo line was nice, better emotion in this verse...Hollow as the bottles I smash...ok this verse was a lil' nicer to me
wishin' u did somethin' different with the hook...makin' me distracted haha
oh ok thought u were comin' in wit' a 3rd verse... So Why no doubles behind your verse?? think that would make the overall feel a lil' stronger
flow is ok needs a lil' work in parts but overall as a track this was solid....besides the hook
Feel this beat was a lil' too slow tempo for what would fit your rhyme schemes better also
HoLLa
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