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Old 07-30-2014, 12:24 AM   #11
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Lyfza Gamble: This was a topical match, and you for some reason decided to use punchlines and terrible wordplay, as you always do. You didn't make it personal at all. You didn't describe much or have any good lyricism. You wrote a shitty, generic battle verse. This was a topical match.

big baby: I thought you did a nice job explaining why your ass is so fuckable and why you enjoy being fucked in it. You were clever and had nice wordplay. The topic didn't exactly inspire me, but you wrote it well.

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