[wolfdick]

first paragraph was awesome bro. The ending made me laugh yet it was some real shit so props on making it funny while still give you that "just my fuckin luck" feel. My favorite parts in this part was the
"Some days are harder than most. Some days I think, why bother? I smoke to break the monotony, to cope. Until smoking becomes montonous. I'm broke. Locked in a bottomless hole that's waiting to swallow me whole. It'd be comical if the consequences weren't so ominous. A joke."
That whole section was really well done and spoke volumes about life in general for the people below the upper and middle class

the second paragraph was more focused on one particular feeling or thought; apathy while still trying. Rare to display but very often felt. The flow trailed a bit compared to the first paragraph but was still strong and still had a lot of good points, especially again the last line. I myself have felt like this a few times, when you don't try its admired but when you do try its chastised. nothing to be chastised here.

The third paragraph really brought it all home, the flow picked up as did the emotions and thought provoking wording ie
Hoping if I can define it, I can make me believe it. Examine and dissect it. Write about it. Explain it in thesis. Tame it and seize it 'til the strangeness seizes. Spoiler alert! It doesn't work.
This really tells us all we need to know about this piece. Your examination of the world today and realizing that no matter how closely you monitor it and study it there is just some stuff so stupid, so crazy, and just plain out of your control that you'll never fully understand it. This was dope my brother, The ending was very real considering the fact the thoughts you displayed here are along the lines of plenty of people I've known personally and celebrities alike that committed suicide become of the fact that the world will not and cannot change for the better because of the want for it to.
I loved this man forreal, keep dropping....and not off of balcony's