It's gonna be quick because I'm on my phone.
Camp Bell you had a good flow in the first half even though it was a bit predictable. After the Saturn line the verse seemed to go downhill from there. There wasn't much creativity here either which is something I'd expect from an S&F verse. I've seen much better from you.
Alvin Karpis you're verse had much better concepts. The Lebron line could've been much better if it was reworded somehow, but the boot camp bar was great I thought. Line of the battle imo. This was cool.
V/Alvin Karpis
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