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Old 07-28-2014, 04:15 PM   #16
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is a paramedic's soul wasted trying to put a stop to what's inherited through aging?
this was a funny/interesting thought
man, this was dense. but in a good way. you pack a lot of information into a single line, but i feel it makes for a more... idk, colorful read. I dont see the flow as suffering from these extended lines either, if anything it promotes originality, being that your content comes first. And i see what Vulgar means by the immortal technique type flow.

you should stick around, id love to read more
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