Mike Wrecka, a powerful piece filled with strong descriptive emotion & imagery. One of the better schemes this week & your story flowed very well. It has a sense of heartbreak and depression, usually these pieces don't match up well against other approaches, but this was written very well though. You're an underrated writer. Red, I am highly impressed with your piece this week. You've been rising steadily & your pieces seem to be improving each week. Imagery was pretty ridiculous meshed with great word selection, rhyme scheme was dope & the story had me locked in from start to finish. Very impressed. Mike wrote a good piece, but compared to the other, it falls short.
MVGT: Red glare.
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