Both of jhese were alright i felt like blacks was easier to read and the ciggy topib was cool duckin something a lot of ppl could relate to as for ceqtahn i felt like a lot of the story warnt expkained as if it was up to the reader to decide wat happened besides a few minor grammaticle errors i actually enjoxed urs more because i hate my nicotine addiction
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